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August 14, 2013

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Mark Forsyth

I'm struggling with the phrase "thou didst note my working breast" - what does it mean? It's difficult for modern ears to sing without feeling a little awkward!

Other archaic phrases are "I will move thee" and "to enroll thee".

Any comments on these?

Jim Gordon

Hello Mark - thanks for your question, and I fully understand the dissonance with 17th C language and a 21st C reading. "Working breast" I take to mean both quickened heartbeat, and the raised emotions of someone anxious for acceptance and reassurance. There's quite a lot of that in Herbert, writing a t a time when devotional feelings and affections were much more explicitly stated. "I will move Thee..." is the stated intent of the supplicant to persuade, influence and move the emotions of God to accept the praise and enable the one who praises. Likewise 'enroll' is to seek commitment and support for the supplicant's goal and intention, that is, that God will enable and accept the praise and gratitude of the worshipper. There is always a sense of unworthiness in Herbert, and likewise a feeling of the inadequacy of his 'utmost art'. Hope that helps.

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